(sadfs 2nd time commenting, the first didn't go through ;_; sorry if this is a bit short! DD; )

AHH ZEFIEEEEEE your art gets moar amazing every time. seriously, this is impressive. I love the whole layout of the drawing, we can really tell that you thought well about all the elements and details to place. it's very well balanced, everything fits perfectly. your inking as usual is neat (that you don't even need to edit it on the pc!) and omg the dots ;-; *salutes*. I love how you did the roller coaster, the perspective just adds more depth and makes this more fun and mesmerizing to look at. the characters too, even though I know nothing about them but their expressions are very convincing.
I don't even know what to critique xDD overall I love it~ *favs* and good luck with the contest dearie /o/ <333333

amazinggg<33 your art is so amazingly detailed and soft. props to you for colouring with watercolours so smooth and neat. I'm wondering if you use special paper for your drawings? anyway love the designs. keep up the wonderful work :'D

awh pretty design! I love the light saturated colours chosen for the bg. the strings attached from the umbrella to the skirt is a neat idea too. overall you did a lovely work ;')

the proportions are really well drawn (something that I haven't mastered myself xD; )
and your overall technique is already good though I suggest you work on the expression more , it looks a bit stiff . imo the characters' expression is the most important thing to accomplish first rather than other stuff .
the tone on the skin could do more work too , so it fits with all the blue , try different shading colours , it'll look more natural . also try adding more shading on the hair . if you want to go for a simplistic colouring (almost flat colours or so) lighten the lineart a bit , so it would look softer .
but you did a nice work ~ keep it up !

this is very nice and well worth the effort put ~ I absolutely love the painting of the clouds and the various shading colours for it . your overall colour scheme is soft and pretty <3
however I hope you don't mind a small crit ^^' , the sketchy shading lines on the character is a nice touch , but it could be done a bit neater , since the whole wall itself doesn't have a sketchy feel so I personally would avoid that bit . the flowers are really pretty and detailed , but it would be nice if the insides/shading of the flowers (on the front especially) aren't smudged/blurred too much , since it contrasts with the outlines , doing some cleaner and bolder shadings would make them look better .
but overall you've done a very great job on this and it's a really lovely piece to look at . keep it up !

ahh you always make such lovely walls . this is so sweet ~ I love the whole atmosphere and the footprints and shadows are really well done indeed . I love the various blue shades used . love love <33

I'm guessing you drew this ? you should state it in the description since you're putting this in the wallpaper category instead of doujinshi ^^'

anyway it's really well done . the lineart is very neat and I like the slight glowiness from their features xD the girl's dress is detailed and pretty , though the flow of the clothes need more work as well as the guy's cape shading , it's a bit stiff . some airbrushing of the trees on the bg needs to be cleared a bit too .

but well overall you did a nice work :3 keep it up ~

um yes , you need to write a better description ^^'
the wall is pretty nice , though the blur on the edge of the grass needs more work . seems pretty unfinished to me , it's not done too smoothly . the texture on the road should be touched-up a bit (like reducing the texture as the perspective of the road gets further) so it doesn't seem too flat/2D . but overall the colour choices and concept is well done . keep it up ^^

it's a cute wall , but the scan looks a bit off . it's too blurry/low quality . try brightening up the colours of the whole wall too maybe . but overall it's okay , keep it up ^^

aww adorable ! xD simple and neat . I wish the bg colour is brighter though , but that's just me haha;; (furuba is an angsty dark series anyway ;P)

aww just my type of wall xD I love the simplistic design , and the colours are fab <3

this is so amazing and sweet looking . your painting skills are definitely top notch and I enjoy the illustrations . the small shoes are really cute too ! lovely work <3

the shoulder may look weird because of the sharp edges and the arm lacks curves , but putting that aside , I love everything in this wall *___* it's just so neat <333

aww ! the picture is so cute <3
you did a wonderful job on the vector , it's really clean and neatly done . (total eye-candyyy)
though for this kind of scan , a winter theme seems too .. random . (because the way you did the whole scenery seems like they're in antarctic of something)

but nahh , overall you did a really nice work , both the painting and vectoring ; )

overall it's good , the vector is done very neatly ^^ but , the pattern on the top left corner (bedsheets?) is totally not necessary , since it doesn't suit the whole dark theme . lighting is very important to take note as well , you should remember that . but nice work nevertheless ~

awwww <3 as usual your vectoring skills are top-notch ;3

*gape* this is so gorgeous . I absolutely adore the colours and your painting style . your blend everything sooooo perfect <3 <3 all the characters and details are well done too . I love everything in this D;

*FAVS IT HERE TOO* <3

interesting combination of scans :'D and it works really well together . the painting is indeed wonderfully done , and the overall lighting and feel of the wallpaper is win . sweet work indeed ;3

oh god this is so adorable xD <3 <3 the vector and cging is very well done , lovely work ~

I moved your wallpaper hahahaha V
ohoho since I've seen this in progress in weeks , I have nothing to say :3 lol at house , but very nice painting neee ~ and tree . and you forgot who extracted that scan ! ;P /run

this is so prettyy ~ I totally adore the colours and patterns . the sketchy like feel to it is very nice too . sasuga shi-chan ! *favs*

asdshgahf cuuuuute <3333 I esp love the bright colours ~ neaatttt vector as usual :3

dang you're getting better and better pretty fast xD this is so original and I adore the colour choices . the background design is reallyy nice and completes the picture <3 everything is just well done , lovely work :') and oh , happy birthday ! \:D/